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Aida, your research on Climate Change shows a lot of promise. Obviously, you can write and you have a lot to work with, a lot of tools to expand upon and utilize towards the development of new techniques, modes, and experiences in writing. However, you haven't really gotten into a rhythm, and I don't have much to work with in terms of feedback. I'm reluctant to get into the specifics of writing with you, because I would probably start chirping away about something that you either already know or that you aren't ready to hear yet. I'm hoping you can find your groove and join the fray. At the midpoint of the semester, however, I have no choice but to truthfully and accurately report your progress to OASIS in stark and bleak terms. Please write, and ask questions in class. Let's find out what we can do to help you find your process.
I like how you managed to capture probably almost all the college students in the last verse. "how can I do any work? after all it's already 1:04am". I pretty much think that every night.
Comments (8)
Danielle Renee Heck said
at 12:03 pm on Aug 24, 2010
aww thats cute!!
Ardemis said
at 12:03 pm on Aug 24, 2010
=D
Andrea said
at 6:27 am on Aug 29, 2010
I like how you managed to capture probably almost all the college students in the last verse. "how can I do any work? after all it's already 1:04am". I pretty much think that every night.
Ardemis said
at 8:11 pm on Aug 30, 2010
lol sweet, i was just referring to myself when i wrote that.
Ehle so fly said
at 11:09 am on Aug 31, 2010
i like your song its cute!
Ardemis said
at 11:18 am on Aug 31, 2010
gracias!
Ardemis said
at 11:18 am on Aug 31, 2010
gracias!
RonnyG said
at 11:09 am on Aug 31, 2010
Found your page and commented :) RAWR!!
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