portfolio elements:

***final/current draft that showcases what you want us to look at at length. this can be all the up-'til-now + anything else that comes in during your focused revision/delivery. fit and finish. buff and polish.

***coversheet/metaprogramming: tell us how to respond, tell us what you learned, situate your polished offering and the style of feedback you have cultivated:

1. who is your audience?

2. what is the purpose of the work that you have bundled for our scrutiny and enjoyment?

3. message/medium: what is the relationship between content/form? Between medium/message? You can reflect on the process thus far and speculate about where you might go next.

4.  what did you do in this experiment that most pleased you, and how did you do this/how did it happen? What route did you take in your experiment in composition-by-emergence?

5. Talk about tone (molecular): what atmosphere are striving for and what compositional techniques do you employ ? Or, talk about genre: what templates and other available ordering principles to you use to activate audience expectations?

6. When answering #1-5, above, please remember to characterize and reflect upon the mode of feedback that you adopted during the first phase of the semester.

***feedback: show the feedback that you provide for others (3X). Please be sure to reflect on the specific techniques, function, philosophy, dynamic, etc of the diverse modes of engagement and writing we are calling feedback, as per questions 1-5, above.

Jon's Unit One Portfolio - this draft is in the process of being edited for your consumption.

1. Meghan's Feedback for Jon

2. Dylan (ready for editing? assumption: possibly.. beginning now)

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Jenna Gravino's Unit One Piece (edit this!)

1. Elizabeth

2. Jaime's Review

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Turning Over a New Stomach: Kelsey Hastings Unit One

1. Jenna's Edits

2. Lindsey's feedback/edit

3. Jaime's Remix

4. Trina's Edits (added comments on latest Travel Article Remix also)

Trina  - Portfolio Emergence info currently on main page

1. Elizabeth

2. Kelsey's Remix of the A-Bomb

3. Jenna's Edits

4.  ANY TAKERS ? MY PORTFOLIO OF EMERGENCE JUST WENT IN FOR RECONTRUCTIVE SURGERY!

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April

1. Adam

2. Dylan (in progress/nearly complete)

3. Heidi

Elizabeth

1. Jenna's edits

2. Lauren

3. Meghan's Remix/Interpretation

Heidi

1. Elizabeth

2. Andrew

3. Meghan's Remix for Heidi

ADAM'S EMERGENCE 

1. Trina's comments on Perhaps, about me, By the Bay

2. Megan Bailey - Remix in French of Adam Parker's "Perhaps"

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Casey

1. Jaime's review (.doc)

2. Trina's edits on Casey's feasibility analysis

Lauren

1. Trina's comments on Short Stories & Questions? and The Real You; please advise if you have any specific pieces you'd like reviewed

2. Heidi's remix

Megan Bailey - particularly Typing while drinking cold coffee, eating a nectarine, and listening to Cat Power, which is the first installment of a nonfiction piece

1. Adam

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M O'Neill's Portfolio of Emergence

1. Dylan (in progress/ nearly complete)

2. Andrew

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Andrew Copeland

1. Meghan's Comments for Andrew

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