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Amber's Writing process

Page history last edited by Amber Schlage 13 years, 5 months ago

AMBER'S WRITING PROCESS

 

When we first began talking about this NOFO and its entire process I was extremely confused, and I was completely lost! I had no idea what was going on or what I needed to be doing. I tried diffrent approaches to the project, I tried different ways of listening but nothing seemed to work. I asked different people in the class how they were interprating this assignment but it seemed that no ones explanation was clear to me. I also tried paying close attention to our class discussions, although I was not participating I was listening very closely to everything said and what was going on trying to create my own understanding of our assignment. So for my NOFO I did as little as a could which was not acceptable nor passable.

 

Then one day after I spent my time looking at everyone else's pages, and giving my full attention in class, my light bulb started to flicker, it wasn't quite completely on yet but it was getting there, slowly but surely and I started my research for my NOFO. I picked a specific organization and began writing my problem statement for that specific organization.

 

Essay Writing

I spent my time writing to a nonprofit organization that helped in mentoring children in our area and I soon came to find out that it wasn't one organization we were writing to but ultimately, types of local organizations in need of a grant. My light bulb switch was completely turned on at this point and I had a great understanding of what we were doing, I revised my problem statement so that it better fit what we needed to complete.

 

I then continued on to give feedback to my peers, such as Dsterns Problem Statement, so that he could revise and remix his work making it even better than it started out to be. Meanwhile, I too was receiving feedback from my peers to help me remix and better my own work, such as when April helped me remix my writing process, helping me learn and expand my writing techniques. Overall, remixing with this specific assignment helped me to gain a better understanding of it, from pin pointing just one non profit organization just generalizing to particular types of organizations. From this I now have a better understanding of the total assignment instead of just bits and pieces.

 

Now that I have gone through this process I have learned so much about the Wiki,  writting process, how to help my peers better their writing, taking their feedback to make my work better, and working as a team. The Wiki is a very valuable tool when it comes to writing because it allows us to write and write and write, using all of the techniques we have been learning from our text book, such as rhetorical knowledge, and critical thinking, reading, and writing. The Wiki is also a great example of writing technologies, using an on line network to communicate our writing and comment on others.  I have become a better peer editor over all from evaluating my peers work and remixing it for them, also doing the same with my work from the feedback they have given me. Altogether, on this huge Wiki network our class has been working together, as a team, to become better writers, readers, editors, and over all a better team.

 

Ambers WTEvaluate Portfolio

 

 

Copy of Amber's Writing process

 

 

 

 

 

 

Comments (5)

Ehle so fly said

at 3:42 pm on Nov 8, 2010

Hey girly, good start to the writing process. Try to focus on points that we are supposed to touch in our reflection such as rhetorical knowledge, writing technologies, revision, feedback, writing habits, etc. in order to be more detailed about your writing process, and what you learned from the Wiki. Also this is supposed to be a video or audio ( see mine/david/or Jay's). If you do not have a video camera you can search: screen capture video pc (this will allow you to record video of your screen and audio when explaining your writing process, you can simply download that program for free) Also Jay did audio so if you look at his page you can probobally use the same audio recording website he did.

Ehle so fly said

at 3:43 pm on Nov 8, 2010

Also there are many spelling errors in here, and run on sentences so it would be much easier to just create a video so that your spelling cannot be judged.. Consider using this as an opening to your reflection though! :)

Amber Schlage said

at 3:54 pm on Nov 8, 2010

Thank you so much Ehle!!! I appreciate it!

Ehle so fly said

at 3:57 pm on Nov 8, 2010

No problem call me if you need extra help or want to borrow my video camera, I could come by the dorms :)

ShareRiff said

at 6:02 pm on Nov 8, 2010

Yes, yes, Amber, this is great turn-around narrative, and I am certain that it was more fun to write than previous reflections. You have a good structure outlined, here. Now, go back to the remix paragraph (in green), and provide two or three examples of the feedback that occurred. Connect each of these examples to a SLO (rhetorical knowledge, critical thinking/reading/writing, composing processes, knowledge of conventions, and writing in electronic environments). For example, you could connect the experience of "remixing" your problem statement into the format of the NOFO template (from wiki --> .doc) to the "knowledge of conventions" SLO or the "writing in electronic environments" SLO.

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