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Page history last edited by Estefania Sanchez 13 years, 3 months ago

 

 

 

 

 

 

1. What part of your process or your final paper most pleased you? Why?

I overall liked writing all of it just because I was so interested in the topic. But one of the most pleasing part of my final paper would have to be the statistics. Writing with the statistics just made my topic more realistic to the readers.

 

 

 

2.  who is you primary audience? who is your secondary audience?

My primary audience are younger people and my secondary audience are people in their mid 30's

 

 

 

3. Where do you want readers to offer critical feedback? In other words, what aspect of the writing process is most difficult for you right now?

 

I want readers to offer me feedback on my way of writing. The most difficult thing to do in my perspective is to catch the readers attention. If someone isn't interested in what you're writing about it is likely that they won;t pay attention to it. I would like some feedback on how to keep my readers on track and entertained in the topic.

 

 

4. What was your goal / purpose?  What did you want to accomplish?  Did you feel you succeeded?

 

My goal was to get my topic across and get people to open their eyes about violence, all types of violence especially domestic. I wanted to accomplish awareness in others lives. I feel like I did succeed because in the NOFO my team PIF focused on domestic violence so with that my topic will be carried towards others and they too will be informed about this problem and create a way to stop it and create awareness in others lives, just like I did. Paying it forward.

 

5. If you re-worked your essay, what would you change/tweak (if anything)?  Why?

 

If I could change anything it would probably have to be the time I spent writing, I would devote more time into my writing.

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